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[作文号:2851514] 题目自拟(2023-04-17)
要求:In 2023, the most popular TV series "The Knockout (狂飙, Kuangbiao)" made Zhang Songwen a model for good acting. After years of practicing his craft, he accumulated enough skill and finally gained recognition from the public in his 47th year. His life story is touching: he was rejected over 800 times in three years before becoming famous in China. He is indifferent to fame and fortune, and has refused many performance invitations due to disagreements with his partners on role interpretation or script quality.For ordinary people like us, we can also gain a lot of inspiration from Zhang Songwen's experience. Many people are afraid of rejection and failure, but in fact, everyone will go through this process. The key is to persistently pursue our own dreams and never give up. At the same time, we should pay attention to our inner selves and not lose our principles and conscience for fame and fortune. Please write a 300–800-word commentary on the unique phenomenon of "two-way rejection" experienced by Zhang Songwen. You can explain your argument and reasons based on your personal experience and please give a valid argument to show this compare and contrast with this Chinese Hero.参考译文:2023年最爆火的电视剧《狂飙》的热播,使得张颂文成为了一个好演员的典范——沉寂多年打磨演技后积累了足够的实力,并最终得到了大众的认可。作为励志的典范,他的人生经历让人动容:三年内被拒绝了800多次,直到47岁才红遍中国;他淡泊名利,因为角色理解或剧本质量上与合作方的分歧,他曾拒绝了众多演出邀约。对于我们平凡人,也可以从张颂文的经历中得到很多启示。很多人害怕被拒绝,害怕失败,但其实每个人都会经历这一过程,关键是要不放弃,坚持不懈地追寻自己的梦想。同时也要注重自己的内心,不要为了名利而失去自己的准则和良心。请就张颂文所经历的“双向拒绝”这一独特现象撰写一篇300-800词的评论文章,你可以根据自己的个人经验以及有效论据来阐释自己的论点和解释原因。
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截止日期:2023-05-20
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